Tuesday, July 31, 2007

Wording help needed

I'm typing up some Thank You notes and I need some help with the wording.

On the front of the card I have this:


and it says: You've been a real lifesaver.


Inside of the card it says:

We would have been sunk without your help at Girls' Camp.
Mahalo, blah blah blah.

We'll be giving out a pack of lifesavers with the Cards.




Does that SUNK part make sense? Or does it make you think of a skunk and other stinky stuff? Any ideas?

13 comments:

nikko said...

Does "we would have sank" sound better?

Amanda said...

I think it sounds cute! You are so sweet and creative! :)

Elizabeth-W said...

I get it 100%. Geez. That was easy! You already came up with the clever part--I just needed to tell you so!

Liam's Mom - Gina said...

Sunk is perfect!

wendy said...

Thanks guys - I printed them off and the YW will sign them tonight!

Deanne said...

I think you did good! 'Sunk' sounds good, or not improper. Maybe I should have said....you done did good thar little lady, wah huh! :)

Suzanne said...

Sounds good to me! :)

Tori :) said...

Hey I didn't get to vote before you printed them off!
I think they are wonderful. Now, proceed...

No Cool Story said...

I can't vote, since you already printed them AND I have a hard time keeping verbs in the correct context.
I alaso have a hard time with in, on, at...so confusing.

Anyway, cute idea!!

txmommy said...

i never thought skunk!

orchard_girl said...

Way to go on getting them done so quickly. I'm good at making them and writing in them, but horrible at sending them out

Butterfly Wife said...

well I can offer my opinion at this late date, but I think however you did it sounds just fine. ;-)

Sketchy said...

I think this is adorable and am saving it as a future idea! Thanks!